Wednesday, 2 May 2018

Helping Circle

We got straight back into writing on Monday morning, and worked hard to remember our goals and Success Criteria. After writing we had a Helping Circle, and we were impressed with what our buddies had written. It was obvious some people had been practising their writing over the holidays. 
There were some great examples of hooking the audience in, eg.
 Do you think I was sick on the plane?
Wow! You really want to know how many rats were in the trap.
Splash! I jumped into the pool.
Wow the flight was long.

 

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