Year 3 have been experimenting with writing about the feeling of hunger. You will see more of their writing in this weeks school newsletter.
I slivered out of the pool as starvation took over me. I rushed for my food like a bull dog was chasing me.
Joab
As I crawled out of the pool hunger took over. I rushed to my bag, ripping it open and gobbled my snack.
Oto
As I got out of the pool, I felt I could eat an elephant. As I looked around at everyone else, they looked like food.
Rory
I scampered out of the pool, my body shaking.
My arms and legs trembling with frozenness.
Cold water dripping down my back.
Emma M
I'm really proud of your writing. You all created great images in my mind as I read them.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Danny
I love the writing. You have managed to paint a picture in my head.
ReplyDeleteGood job!
Nicola