Scott's literacy group have been working on writing character descriptions.
We have created written pieces describing our favourite breakfast , very popular and too delicious!
There were cries for Dragons last week so we decided to create a description of one. Check out some of these amazing descriptions filled with similes, exciting verbs and action galore!
#1
I looked outside and spotted something. It flies with great big wings and fire. It looks like a lava flying thing! I have a closer look and see that it is a two-headed lava dragon! It lives in a volcano and disguises itself as lava. It eats lava all the time. It has a dark heart and uses it for blowing lava from its mouth. It looks like lava and growls like a tiger. It is scary. If its eyes are red it means it is not my dragon because mine has blue eyes. It sits and waits for its prey. It is always ready to jump out and eat something with one single gulp. It can pick up great rocks with its lava tail and can throw it so far that it goes into the sun.
By Romy
#2
One night something whizzed out of the sky. Splash it landed in the water. It was an oval shape and it was glowing. The next day I went to the beach and swam in the water. I saw a glowing object in the sand. I dug it out. It was the same shape I saw earlier in the night. It was an egg. I took it home. That night I woke up because I heard creaking noises. Every second a creak appeared on the egg. The egg began to hatch a dragon. On the end of its tail was a glowing moon.
This dragon lives on the moon and it breaths moon rocks. He sleeps during the day inside a huge crater. It can turn invisible at night. It is the only one of its kind , a magical moon dragon that is as big as me and only eats moon crystals!
By Alfred
#3
Dragons are venomous and some are super heros. Some are not superheros because they chase people for fun. I know one that is as dangerous as an anaconda. It likes to bathe in the sunlight. He digs underground for its prey. He loves to eat giant worms and snails and has to eat 600 a day! He hibernates in winter and comes out in early spring. They haunt their forest and keep people away. One night one landed on my house. Crack, crack, crack my house crumbled into pieces. He grabbed me on the shoulder and it dropped me from the sky. It was 600 metres high. When I was falling I saw a pack of them. The one that attacked me was the queen.
The dragon I am talking about has claws as sharp as a sharks mouth. The teeth are very pointy. It growls like a snake with a ‘Hissssss’. I am scared of its prickly scales that are all over its back. It is sneaky as a ninja. At night it snores and rumbles all over the world. It’s belly wiggles and jiggles as it sleeps.
By Isabella
Still a way to go as we are hoping to add more about their diet, or home or even a special power they
may possess.
#4
My dragon is too big to fit in my house (it is really BIG). It spits acid and fire. It’s 3 tails have wrecking balls and it has 13 crazy eyes and four fangs. It lives in caves and forests that are dark.
Otto
Stay tuned for further updates!