Thursday, 19 February 2015

The Night Sky - By Jupiter

A black carpet filled the sky as it turned to night. 
I smelt the day fade away.
I felt darkness gather around and I heard the silent moon rise at the beach.

7 comments:

  1. Wow Jupiter! This is a fantastic poem. You have painted a picture in my mind. Nicola

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  2. What a great poem Jupiter. I can't wait to read your next.

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  4. Charlie P: I felt like I was in the poem. Go Jupiter!

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  5. Evie: Awesome poem Jupiter!

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  6. A rising star from New Zealand.. Hugo von Hoffmansthal couldn't have expressed it better... Keep on, Jupiter!

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  7. A rising star from New Zealand... Hugo von Hoffmansthal couldn't have expressed it better... Keep on, Jupiter!

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