Writing this week has been loads of fun. We have been working on how to hook our reader into our stories. We have also been learning about onomatopoeia and how to use them in our writing to add POP!
Here are some examples.
Sophie F
BOOM!
My house cracks in half.
Lightening and thunder hit the sky
CRASH!
A tree crashes on a school and breaks things.
Jugni
SNAP!
A tornado picks up 1,000 people.
BOOM!
A tsunami crashes into boats and splits it into eight pieces.
CRASH!
A helicopter smashes down to save the people.
Luella
SWISH!
The tsunami floods houses!
BOOM!
The thunder shakes my house!
CRASH!
The waves and the wild hail!
CRACK!
My house has a hole!
Marco
Powerful Tornados zap the grey clouds.
Lightning bolts shake the boats.
Splash!
The boats sink to the bottom of the sea.
Waves smash together.
Louis
BOOM!
The people are scared.
WOOSH!
The tornado sucks up a home.
BOOM!
That was a lightning strike. It is attacking a home.
Ava-Jean
SPLAT!
The waves crash.
SPLAT!
The sea is smashing the sand.
My sandcastle broke.
NOOOOOOOO!
I have to make it again!
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