Sunday, 20 October 2013

The Storm


Writing

Danny’s literacy group did a  shared writing about the storm. We all added our ideas to the story.

The Storm

I woke in the dead of night, startled by the storm. Crash! Boom! Thudder!

But wait… the storm has passed, it’s still outside.

Then what made that noise?

I got out of bed and carefully opened the door.

I looked up into the sky and saw what was creating the lightening.

A scaly one eyed dragon.

I dived back under the covers.




3 comments:

  1. I love this poem. You have painted a picture in my mind! Nicola

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  2. This is fabulous writing because you used strong adjectives which made us feel like we were really there! Love from Chrissy's base group.

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  3. Great to see you looking at other group's writing, go Chrissy's base group! Jude

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